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La Brea

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originally done in oils, this piece, really is the inner child..
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
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You said originally done in oils... is this a different media? I really like the thick paint on the flowers. It makes them the main focal point of the piece. That and it's part in the composition carry your eyes thru the painting very well. I kind of would like to see a few more faintly in the background leading to somewhere of the unknown.

As far as the girl goes... she needs help. Her arm looks damaged from her upper arm all the way down to her fingers. There's a foreshortened angle which is hard to capture. The way you did it makes her look like she has a deformity. I didn't like the fact that her face seems unfinished but it grew on me. I also keep coming back to the harsh outline on her back. Whether that's a good thing or not is up to you.